My Best Friend’s Brother by ʟɪɴᴢᴠᴏɴᴄ at Inkitt
Customize readability
Aa

My Best Friend’s Brother

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

T E M P T A T I O N | S E R I E S B O O K | T H R E E Logan Zander. The younger brother of my best friend, Ellie. Totally off limits. Hotter than fire. Disinterested in me. Until that one night... Now I can't get him out of my mind.

Status
Excerpt
Chapters
5
Rating
4.8 125 reviews
Age Rating
18+

P R O L O G U E

I met Ellie working at a little cafe near me, and we instantly hit it off. She was into the same stuff I was, and boom, we were inseparable, despite her being five years older than me. Some people are ageless, and Ellie was like that at twenty three.


She didn’t like my boyfriend, Carlisle, but not many people did. He was an arrogant asshole, but God, he was gorgeous.


He just knew it.


One day, we were hanging out at Ellie’s house, watching Netflix and painting our nails, usual shit you do when you’re bored. I was moaning about not being married to Noah Centineo, and she was agreeing with me.


Maybe we were a little too vocal, because a thud on the bedroom wall made me jump.


“Shut the fuck up! Some of us are trying to sleep!” A voice yelled, and Ellie narrowed her eyes, glaring at the wall.


“No! You keep me up all night with your skanky ass girls, so I won’t be quiet!”


I knew Ellie had a younger brother, but I hadn’t met him. I’d seen photos of him, but not once had I seen him in reality.


So when I heard heavy footsteps making their way to Ellie’s room, I sat up nervously. The door boomed open, hitting the side of the television as Logan Zander filled the doorway.


He was twenty, but I didn’t give a damn.


Black tousled hair, bare chested, and grey eyes that scorched the room as they searched for Ellie. He seemed to hesitate, his gaze halting on me before he sneered at Ellie.


“I said, shut the fuck up. Some of us have work.”


Ellie jutted her chin up, her eyes flashing.


“And I said, no. Fuck you.”


His eyes glittered dangerously, and I found myself talking.


“Sorry. It’s fine, we’ll keep it down.”


He doesn’t even look at me as he glares at his sister, lifting his perfectly shaped eyebrows.


“You could learn a thing or two from your mate.”


He then slams the door, and it’s like the whole house trembles.


“He’s such a dick!” Ellie exclaimed, and I remember just sitting there, twisting my eternity ring around my finger.


A dick, he may be, but fuck me, he was beautiful.


I didn’t see much of him over the next year, as I was working at the local supermarket whenever I wasn’t at college, and this meant my nights out and free time was few and far between.


But when I did see him, he had the ability to make my heart slam in my chest, and my core ache with desire. I couldn’t explain it—he was angry as fuck, and an absolute dick to almost everyone, but he never said a word to me.


Even when I heard him fucking his girlfriend, it didn’t put me off.


I was jealous, because it wasn’t me.


Ellie watched me carefully, telling me repeatedly that no, her brother wasn’t a nice guy, and urgh, would he just fuck off already and move out.


I hoped he didn’t.


Ellie wasn’t worried about me, because I was with Carlisle. Like Logan, he was older than me, and we’d been together for years. Five, to be exact.


Yes, we met in school.


I was into older guys, older friends. I got on with older adults better than most people my age, because most of them were cunts.


Which didn’t explain why Logan Zander had the effect on me that he did. For a start, he was skinnier than Carlisle. Whereas Carlisle packed muscle and perfectly gelled hair, Logan had the dark haired, cigarette smoking party boy look down to a T.


Even I didn’t understand it.


Until he noticed me.




Let ʟɪɴᴢᴠᴏɴᴄ know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

1

Spicy

Suspenseful

1

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

1

Heartwarming

Shocking

2

Shocking

Good Writing

2

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

3

Great Character

Strong Dialog

1

Strong Dialog

View 10 previous comments…
author

❤️

5 years
author

this just might become one of my favorites

5 years
author

My first Linzvonc book! Still one of my all-time favorites ❤️🌟 Love the characters.

5 years

Further Recommendations

Silver's Second Chance

Clare: Loved the second chance mate story line. But loved even more the strong female lead. Would love to a mini fic of this couple a few years down the line.

Read Now
Buried Alive

Irene: Its the story revolves in the same kind of situation I was hoping abit more like the story of Jane's family, life of mx and Jane, like how is the relationship between Lynn and Caleb more. Probably first readers who are starting to have reading hobby, I feel it could be higher rating but honestly I w...

Read Now
Bloodlines

Janet Gagg: Enjoyed the plot and looking forward to finding out where the story is headed, are there more like her ?

Read Now
Ruthless Lord

AlyKeller: I love this story about a girl hated by her father and sister because her mother died given birth to her. She is sent away to a farm from her life in a castle, where she learns how to survive, hunt, and fight. She is forced into an arranged marriage by her dad and king. Her life takes a change for t...

Read Now
Sweet Caroline

Clinton Foster: So far, I’ve only disliked one draft. It was the last one. It’s a lovely book.

Read Now
Milky Treasures on a Healing Love

Booklover_rdx: A different but good story. Basically a love story with a twist- i enjoyed every word of it

Read Now
Broken Halos MC

Danielle: Immediately hooked on this book. I couldn’t stop reading it. I love the characters and the storyline. Very well written and I’m super exited to read the other ones. I highly recommend reading this!

Read Now
We Only Fake It on the Weekends

Raven : I loved everything about this! Stayed up way too late on a week day to finish it! Love love loved it! And fuck fake friends who want our sloppy seconds!!

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Lynne: Beautiful short story with a happy ending.luved it.

Read Now