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Great job

"Grammar is fantastic and story build up is good. Could pace up though."

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Something sweet

"Great read"

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Hook, line and sinker for me!

"I read a little snippet on an ad and just had to find this novel. The story line so far has me impatient that I can't read it fast enough. I'm looking forward to watch Chloe and Liam's relationship evolve!"

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Cupcake sweet

"The author gives you just a little more with every chapter. Letting you get hints of what’s it leading up too. I love that even though the female character just had everything taken from her but still has the strength to walk away rather than just to accept the money. Hopefully she keeps the female MC with the “I rather work hard for it than to sell my soul for it” kind of attitude. "

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I like the story so much, can you please tell us if you are planning to update it or write another book that completes this one?

"The story is quite intersting however it took forever for them to confess to each other and when that finally happens we ar left with a huge hangcliff, so waitin for the next update, the sooner the better"

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Sweet temptation

"So far so good ! The plot and storyline are very good with nice characters and good dialogue between them . Some minor errors but a good editing will fix it to make this love story a great one . "

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Great book!

"Your book was really good. Finished reading your book in one day"

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Sweet Temptation

"sooooo loved the story...💜💜💜 thank you for the book! a job well done! 👍"

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Sweet Temptations

"Love the plot! A bit long though, I don’t know if the length of the story actually made the story better...some chapters felt like ‘fillers’. some grammatical errors are present. Thank you for sharing! ❤️"

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Great story

"I really enjoy reading this!!! "

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Sweet temptation

"Amazing book just finished best book I've read in a while xxx"

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Sweet Temptation

"The story is so sweet and I love it❤ "

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EPIC!

"SOOOOO good! Its a really good book and the author has a way of capturing you so you are waiting everyday for updates! This book is emotionally and physically detailed making it a FANTASTIC read !!"

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Nice

"The plot was good and has a really good story line, I liked how strong the main girl was but I didn’t enjoy when she didn’t want to be with him cause of lack of trust when he was willing to just lose everything to try with her "

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Lovey dovey

"Cute love story "

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Sweet temptations

"Really good storyline ! Enjoying it so far"

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Sweets Temptation

"I love it so much . 😍😍😍 Pls keep write more books in the future . "

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Love the story. Spicy yet sweet :)

"Veey good writing....just the right amount of spiciness n sweetness! Love it!"

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Steph

"I'm loving this book and it's story line. I'm hoping that Liam's mother does not cause any problems between him and Chloe or Scott and Melanie. Can't wait to see how it all ends "

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Sweet Temptations

"I like the way this story flows but the main male character Liam can be a bit of an ass and I can see Chloe heading for a world of heartache."

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