Inkitt
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"You have a fantastic idea going on here, and I would love to learn more about your world and it's state. (I'm a sucker for world building) The visuals and locale seem rather unique, I'm rather fascinated by collapsed underground being exposed to the light - it would be easy to fit a metaphor there. One thing that I had trouble understanding was why the medical supplies were illegal, and why they were forced into working under such conditions. But all in all, I think you have a lot of potential in this story. (PS. Welcome to Inkitt!)"

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