What is your opinion?
Great short story!
"I enjoyed this a LOT, from beginning to end. The first sentence had me hooked and you didn't let go until the very end. The violence between husband and wife and that chilling ending brought it all together beautifully. I think that while you did a lot of telling as opposed to showing, the characters were well put-together for such a short space of time. You might have done more with the chilling atmosphere during the scene where she's trying to kill him. And I'm not sure, is the wife dead? That's what I assumed, but I'm not sure. I like how you left the story kind of open-ended. It leaves something to the reader's imagination, and I like that a lot. There were a lot of typoes through the story that need to be fixed, but other than that the writing was enjoyable. Great work! I would love to see more by this author!"
