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What is your opinion?

I have no idea

"Well I love this book so far it's amazing and the best book I've read so far there were a few parts where I got confused because of some misspelling of just because of grammar mistakes, but overall I love this book so far the plot would be unexpected to a few but I guessed all the plots so I knew what was most likely about to happen in the book. I love your book keep it up "

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Desire

"I adored this book, especially the ending. Yes, there are mistakes in the grammar but honestly they take nothing away from the plot or the emotion that carries through. Great read, can't wait for the sequel × LS ❤"

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Stunning

"This story was amazing it was a roller coaster ride and I cried and laughed. The ending shocked me but I think it was ]perfect for this book. Thus book shows how some people will go to the end of the earth for the people they love. 10/10"

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Desire

"This story was amazing 🤩 "

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Desire

"It was a heartbreaking story... I loved it even if I really but really hate the ending... I think they deserved more , more love ,more life , more time and a happy ever after but you are the boss dear author. Overall the book need to be edited because sometimes I lost the track/meaning of some things. Well done and I beg to for a happy ever after for little William , he deserves it!! "

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Desire

"Awesome book. I loved it. Wished it didn’t end so sad. But I loved it "

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Desire

"I like it very much. It's a good book and I love it. It reflect well the characters, their feelings and their emotions. I liked Lyla but I don't sad for her death. I think she knew the risks when you were inside the mafia also it's available for Sebastian too. You keep it that way! Success with the future books !"

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Forever layla and sebastian

"Amazing storyline. So well written. Sad but happy at the same time."

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So good

"The note at the end really tied up the book for me. I appreciated the authors note. Super good read. I’m looking forward to book 2."

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Desire❤️

"The journey with this book ...was outstanding...❤️ Love everything about this book❤️"

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Desire

"Love this book, sad. But good!! "

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Desire

"Please Don't tell me that is the end I need more ! I Enjoyed this book "

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The story is really good. But the grammar... Come on!

"Adults only. Nice story. Makes me miss my job and read it all up to the end."

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Desire

"Really loved this book hope there's going to be a second one "

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YOU HAVE TO READ IT

"This Author has simply pulled it of in the best way possible. Very engaging and thrilling to take a break. Has everything ranging from unprecedented plot twists to romance. The story has been developed from scratch giving an amazing character development. I find nothing wrong apart from some grammatical errors which is totally fine in this amazing book."

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Omg

"I love this so much .. "

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Plot twist is amazing.. can't get enough..just when u think u can't get anymore surprised by the male character..then boom... another mystery revealed..damn i love this

"The only problem is grammar but it's totally fine coz of all the hard work that goes in to write such an amazing story i understand and i still love the story the same 💖💖"

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Desire

"Hope for a happy end"

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I LIVE for this story

"I absolutely love the plot line of this story, the character development, but also the chapters that include everyday “normal” life, those chapters really deepen my love for this story! "

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Great plot

"The beginning grabs and holds you. As the scenes develop you are pulled in. I am obsessed with waking up to what is new. I open my iPad to read it each morning while I drink my coffee. I love how the characters are developing, as those find their strength, while others show their weaknesses (especially in those you don’t think it would be shown). My rating was lower in “Grammar” but I realized English is not the writers 1st language. VERRRYYYY Steamy"

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