MARVELOUS!!!
"Like the other comments, I am riveted by the story in the story. This was so fantastic! And the being able to change the outcome of the story??? Pure Genius! "
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"Like the other comments, I am riveted by the story in the story. This was so fantastic! And the being able to change the outcome of the story??? Pure Genius! "
"This was one of the most interesting books I've read in a while. I love how Evender expressed himself through the stories he wrote and how Sara helped him through the books. I think my favorite was how she helped him through the last story. I highly recommend this book to everyone. Great writing and minimal typos, grammer, and spelling errors. I'm looking forward to reading more 9f your stories."
"I really enjoy how this story kept taking me places I couldn’t guess. So many hidden turns that that slowly released pieces of the puzzle. Things that bothered me at the start about how a character was acting all made sense by the end. Really enjoyed and recommend "
"I love and loved it all. The writing style. The way it’s so different and unique. And sort of real. And talks brings up certain issues few people struggling with. I love this author and hope they get their books published ASAP❤️🙌"
"This book was a great read. I was a bit confused with the day dreaming at the beginning, it seemed like you didn't know which way you were going to go with the story. Apart from that I can't fault it. Heading on to the next. Ty"
"Worth every bit of my time I spe t here. My time is really expensive and hard to come by but this book held me captive. It was sad but not sad. Romantic but not cheesy. I loved the middle ground that held me captive."
"Lovely the plot complete entralled me.. I'd wish there was a part two version of the story frm guys perspective."
"Couldn't stop reading it!! The complexity of the characters and the unexpected plot was extrenely intriguing!! I love your way of writing and the various different characters as well as the many layers the characters you create in your stories have!! "
"It is simple a fascinating novel, while reading I was thinking of how creative this person could think, it is mysterious at the same time. Conclusion: this novel is a beautiful piece of art. I would love to read more books from you. I have been reading this non stop without breaks by the time I've started reading it, you go dude! "
"This is one of the best books I've read on inkitt. I loved the plot, storyline, everything. I had to get all the stories you have here on inkitt after reading this book. Pls don't stop writing"