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PURCHASED WIFE

"Great story, strong characters, needs to be proof read lots of mistakes in grammar and spelling. I did share with my reading buddies. Awaiting your next update. Ready to see Nathan & Rachel's trauma and pain end.Parents need to quit the interference & give them a chance "

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Great book

"I love it, however, there are many grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be corrected. Otherwise I love the plot and the romance between Nathan and Rachel."

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Purchased wife

"i love Nathan's character, so possessive and yet fragile. he is obviously sexually attracted to her and i hope they find their way to each other and not for the inheritance. i do hope that Nathan has nothing else to do with that entitled secretary of his"

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Book

"I love the unfolding and the growth of the characters. "

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Great story, needs some touch-ups

"The plot is well done and the characters are well described for the reader to envision. Some major proof reading needs to be done though. There are come obvious things like extra spaces in quotations and wrong use of certain words. (Ie accessed vs assessed. Calone vs cologne) Other than that I really enjoy the story!"

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Purchased wife

"Please keep on updating and posting new chapters i really enjoy your work "

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Avid Reader

"What a great story! Can't wait til you finish it. Please!!! "

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Purchased Wife

"I like Rachel and Nathan’s characters. I mean, they are both flawed. Nathan particularly was crazy for his inheritance that he picked any random woman as his wife only to fall in love with her. What a beautiful love story . I love the descriptions. The dialogues. Season 2 looks so sad and as I read it, I feel bad for both characters and heck, I hate Kendrick and Sara. They are the worst🙂🥲🥲"

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Robinson

"I love this book so far."

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Contracted love

" Because it.was.enticing"

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Purchased wife

"The book is a very good one. I think it's very interesting. I would recommend this to many of my friends. "

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I love it

"Everything was awesome"

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Great

"Amazing work,good read"

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purchased wife

"I live the whole setup cant waitfor the end"

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Very good story.

"I like how you can tell what they are thinking with the descriptions. I like how you can see the facial expressions of the characters. I like how the plot is simple yet so exciting. "

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Amazing story!

"This is an amazing story! Even though there are some wrong words and autocorrect errors it is still easy to follow and understand what the author is saying and the point they are trying to get across. Great job! This is a must read!"

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The arrangement

"Thrilling and excellent kept my attention throughout "

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Fate

"What is the story? Waiting "

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Purchased wife

"Okay, the story keeps skipping. They started out at breakfast eating pancakes, next thing you know it’s night or at a different location. Do rich people really get that vulgar? B👀bs, nips, slapping, and fuck! How many times can you use the word fuck for every fucking thing. People were introduced in to the story one minute and never heard of again. Why waste the readers time? ( talking about the party) . I thought something significant was going to happen but they left. Did his friend have anything to say after being dunked in the pool? It’s a good story but it skips around a lot."

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Selfless love

"I liked it. It is good for all the teenager s and youngsters"

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