What is your opinion?
Fascinating
"The author did a great job. I was just engrossed in it. The plot was wonderful and captures one's attention. I truly loved it. Looking forward for more amazing works. Great job. "
Fated love
"Another amazing story from this author. Enjoyed the storyline and the characters."
Aaaahhhh
"This is super sweet"
Eval
"Really looking forward to seeing how this story pans out!"
Fated love
"This story had a great plot the fact the he took her in was admirable. Plus how the stroy ended was beautiful. although i think it missed out on some drama that could have been incorperated...overall a good book."
Fated Love
"I feel like this book has a really good basis it just needs to be worked on a little. Spelling/Grammar issues can be fixed easily and looked over while reading. It did go really quick in my eyes and I would love to know more about the characters, give them a little more depth, what do they love doing, who are they as people? ***spoilers to those who want to read it ahead** I feel like they wouldn't have known she was pregnant that quick and with that many surgeries it would have caused too much stress causing a lot more risk on the pregnancy. Plus you said in one chapter where he was getting her stuff from her apartment that he then drove to his...they live in the same building so that will probably need altering or it doesn't make sense. I am by no means trying to be negative and just trying to help you. I really did like your story and hope it can be at its best. "
