Very good plot, lots of grammar errors.

"This book is good for younger teens. Has a very good plot line; however, there are a few spots where the plot needed some more details. Lots of times there would be a large build up to a scene that was only described with 1-2 sentences. Also, there were often large time gaps/jumps with no explanation of what happened within said gap. Grammar and religion of sent an es did spread quite often. And some sentences seem to contradict one another. All in all the book was very good and I would recommend to any reader who enjoys fantasy and is 13-16 years old."