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Good story

"Good story "

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Need more

"Great writing, needs more chapters! It has a nice balance of ecchi and plot."

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pretty good!

"I was confused at first, with Jamie having male and female parts, but it is a good ook and I do recomend it!"

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Its good

"It's a fun mini story quick right to the point and captures the main characters very quickly "

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💐👏👏💐

"i loved this"

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Great

"Overall incredibly well written enjoyed it all of it hope you can add more "

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Blooming

"Absolutely love this story its fun naughty and keeps pulling you in "

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Awesome

"My ratings were chosen because this really pulled me in, spiked my wants. "

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Late Bloomer

"I haven't really found anything I dislike, I like how it keeps building up to the next chapter "

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Blooming days

"I don’t like that Jamie has both male and female genitalia "

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Blooming Days

"So far it's very good. Intriguing and erotic. Can't wait to read more."

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Funny, Weird and Sexy af

"This thing might be the best piece of erotic art ever written. Such a unique world and ofcourse, sex. The sex scenes are just so amazing. It's a shame it's incomplete. Idk why the author abandoned this but I hope they someday maybe complete the story or atleast keep writing coz she definitely has a lot of potential, specially in this genre of erotic novels where people don't really think about the content and only the spice."

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Blooming Days

"I like it a lot and very different with the focus on both him and her attributes."

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Good

"I like the way the plot is arranged, its really good and erotic, am enjoying myself so far"

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