Inkitt
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Should be a Hallmark movie

"I loved the story! I would not, however, put this story in the erotica category, but romance instead.. I would suggest you get your story edited to remove the typos and improper use of prepositions. There are now editing apps you can use. Good luck with your writing in the future, I'm looking forward to more."

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Da bomb

"Lizzie is always the best"

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A Christmas kiss

"Loved it!! Wow!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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A Christmas Kiss

"This was a short and sweet read. All of Jax’s Aussie lingo was spot on. He fell hard for Beth at the start. They were perfect and completely compatible for each other."

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Great story!

"It's a great Christmas romantic story!! I loved it! ❤"

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A Christmas Kiss

"A fantastic read. If you love romance then you will love this story. So good ❤"

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A Christmas Kiss

"A lovely story with nice characters . The plot is interesting to follow until the very end . Good read "

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Short and sweet 💕

"It's a beautifully written short and sweet story. It captures the attention till the end. Jax was amazing. Surly enjoyed your works👍 🥰🥰🥰"

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A Christmas Kiss

"This was a very good story, I just wished it was more 💗💗💗💗"

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Love this!

"Great story! "

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Love story done right!

"I liked that the main character was a strong young woman who didn’t screw on the first date. "

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Just simply wonderful

"Cute, loving, funny and smart!!!! For romantics that believe in a for ever after....."

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A Christmas kiss

"Loved the story. The plot and the development of the story. Love Jax', wish I had met someone to fight for my love in my youth. Love Beth's free spirit. She is so sweet. And the author using her story as the next novel title for Beth. Enjoyed the book, couldn't put it down from beginning to end. Sweet and short. Love your stories author. Keep on writing. "

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Hooked!!!

"Totally hooked onto the story...been reading for three hours straight. A few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, but otherwise love it!!"

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A christmas kiss

"Absolutely amazing short story completely loved it from beginning to end 💖💖💖"

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Awesome

"I liked the pair of Beth and Aussie guy "

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Wow

"Excellent book. That took a crazy turn. Great storyline and I’m loving the characters and their banter. Can’t wait to finish it. "

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Absolutely love this book!!

"This had been an amazing book "

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A Christmas Kiss

"The author described the emotions of the characters with sheer perfection. The plot was enticing and, for a shorter story, was full of impact!"

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A Christmas 💋

"Such a sweet short story! Love it! Thank you for sharing!❤️❤️❤️"

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