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nice explanation

"Hello! The moment where the narrator suddenly blurts out the correct definition of DNA without even knowing how was such a cool turning point, have you thought about how scenes like that could really hook readers in a Kindle Look Inside preview if you ever published this as an eBook?"

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"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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