Love it

"I love this book. I was expecting it to be a bit different but it’s perfect for me. I love these sci fi agent like stories, I’m sorry but if this isn’t a real book by the time it’s finished then I’m going to cry, waiting for the next update. Love itttt. "

Interesting

"This book is very interesting. Exciting. When I started reading it I couldn't put it down. This Rogue character is very interesting. The plot is really good too. It's so strong that it could make the bath grow cold around you. I could literally visualize most of what was going on. I felt like I was in a movie or some sort. Ahaha. Anyway, I enjoyed this first book and I would recommend it to anyone. Thank you for sharing it. :) "

I love it.

"Interesting and addictive novel. Once started one will get addict to it. "

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As The Sun Rises

"I was hooked from the first page, to the last, and can hardly wait to read book two. The only draw back was the length of some of the chapters! I would much rather read a 50 chapter book with 6-10 page chapters, than a 17 chapter book with 50 page chapters, (or what seemed like 50 page chapters!) All in all, This is a great story line! NRF"

I am hooked

"The story was interesting and engaging from the very start. There were a few grammatical errors and punctuation however over all the story flowed easily. I will be watching for more stories just get a better proofreader :)"

Great!

"Loved this book!! The characters were great! Loved the descriptions of how the new world was described. I was sad when the book ended. I can't wait for the next book to come out. Thank you for sharing your story!"

As the sun rises

"Good read, enjoyed the theme"

I Love!!

"Sci-fi is something I find interesting when the abstract is painted vividly with words and descriptions I can relate to and this book did just that! My only grouse is the first chapter that had a lot of things crammed into it making it rather lengthy and too wordy–preface would have taken some of that–and the few grammatical errors here and there. Overall, the story is super fascinating and I am so digging into the Book Two ASAP! Good work!"

As the Sun Rises

"This is a great book. It is an amazing adventure story. It keeps you reading. I didn't want to put it down. I loved how the past came out as the story progressed. Rogue and Zairea make a good team. I really enjoyed learning about Rogue s abilities along with her friends. I can't wait until the second book comes out to read more about Rogue and Zairea and her friends. I wornder what other adventures are out there for them. "

Generic

"The prose has a nice flow sometimes, but overral the story is bland. One thing I will comment on, which hasn't been mentioned elsewhere, is that this writer is overly focused on the external world. This not only means 'cardboard characters', but that it merely stimulates the visual part of the brain. Imagery is important, yes, but it must serve a purpose, and there should be other factors at play that add layers. The most this novel achieves is occasional excitement. Structurally it is very heavy handed. "

Needs work

"The book is good however the first chapter is a bit long and it does drag on for a bit and I couldn't quite understand the main character rogue as there wasn't a better description of her and why she is the way she is. I unfortunately can't finish this book because it is going on for a bit longer and I don't think it was very interesting read from the beginning "