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Love the setting

"Very intriguing storyline, I love what I have read so far can't wait for more"

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Wonderful!

"Wonderful writing and plot. It's very interesting and engrossing. Everything is clearly explained and the world building is top level. Well done!"

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Good start of a proper fantasy novel/series

"Top fantasy world build, good start for an elaborate fantasy series. The writing style is perfect for this type of book and with hardly any writing/grammatical errors. It was a fluent read. If I'd have to give a down side, it would be the sex scene because although it helps to draw the main character, it also felt a little out of place. I wouldn't go as far as to say that is was written in a different style but the fighting scenes - which can be considered just as physical - were less detailled in comparison. Overall, really enjoyable and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more."

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