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What is your opinion?
It good
"I like the story but I wish there was more. Can't wait to read more tho have a good day or night "
I’m sorry
"I don’t like to be brutally critical, however I think that Inkitt is a higher quality reading platform compared to other reading apps, therefore the difference between this story and many others was steaming. I couldn’t get pass the first chapter of the story due to the very confusing chronological order of events, characters aren’t announced, scenes aren’t explained. There are conversations with people and the reader is left to wonder who is actually talking to whom. Lastly, grammar mistakes are several, resulting in a pretty distracting outcome to an already confused plot. Not worth reading… "
