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Kick-butt w/ a heart

"I love this story. I like that the girl is smart, funny, and strong, but real. I can believe how she'd be stuck between her first love, and this new guy. I like how her friends are there, but not always--like in real life. Sometimes I got confused, but I think that's about my vocab and not the writer, so I gave that part a 4. To me the best part about this story is how Daisy isn't always sure of what she should do, and how she tries to be nice, but sometimes things suck any way. I feel like that's how real life goes. I really want to read the next book in this series, I hope the writer posts it."

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Heart shadows

"I am still waiting for something to actually happen. Waiting now for 349 pages. There are some interesting characters and some openings, but until now I don't see it going anywhere. So the notion "complete " is not really accurate."

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Uh..

"Honestly, this book goes nowhere. Theres no distinguishable plot, beginning, middle, end. Climax, conflict, really nothing. You get the barest hint of SOMETHING that amounts to nothing with the genetic thing that's barely touched on. Rich friend is rich, new friend is a stalker that can manipulate tech, doing less than nothing about the physical stalker, sort of boyfriend is a douche and everything known about him is a lie but let's still talk to him. The book literally doesn't have an ending. Please take this as constructive criticism, plan stories. "

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