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Great!

"I love the story It has a potential to become a great story soon. Some part of the novel is confusing but don't be discouraged you'll learn more. I love the plot and how the story goes! Can't wait for your updates :) XOXO"

Keep it up!

"Just a little reminder about the way you write it's kindda confusing, but aside from it I love the how the story goes. Can't wait what will happen next! :) XOXO"

It's way too awesome!

"Speechless. Love reading it, please do update it every day :) Can't wait. I love the plot. Although sometimes I got confuse, but aside from it. It's awesome! XoXo <3"

Cool!

"Keep it up! It has potential. You can extract imaginations out from nothing! I love how your story goes.. looking forward to it :) Hope you can win this contest!"

It's way too awesome!

"I love how you create this kind of novel! Though I'm somehow confused about some matter, but all in all it's great! Can't wait to read your updates! Keep it up! :)"

It has potential

"I read the first bit of your story and decided to review it now. I think that you've got something good started here, and I think that it has a lot of potential. I'm intrigued and want to know what the story is about. There was just so much clunky wording and typoes that it was a little difficult to read. I think that if you read through it out loud and made some adjustments, it would bring the writing itself forward leaps and bounds. There were also places where you switched randomly between past and present tense. If you choose one and stick to it except in certain situations, I think it would help. Keep it up! This story has good bones, just give it prettier skin. ;-) I hope that you do well in the contest."