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Thoughts

"I felt sad hearing what her father made her do it made me wonder how many people go through this every day and we don't know "

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Alpha’s mistake

"Great story and characters "

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Alpha’s Mistake

"I loved this book I can't wait to read another one of your books. I will definitely be referring this to friends and family or anyone who enjoys this kind of genre."

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Alpha’s Mistake

"Another wonderful read! Again, having a proofreader would be a nice thought. Just to catch any spelling, punctuation or reference mistakes. Looking forward to reading the rest of your books"

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Alpha's Mistake

"It was good. "

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❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Good read ❤️"

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Alpha's mistake

"I loved it so much 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Thank you author for this amazing story 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩"

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Alpha’s mistake

"Loved this story. Will reread it for sure "

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Wonderful story

"Thank you for not having her forgive him at the drop of a hat and for him growing "

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Great story.

"Enjoyed the read. A few grammar errors and mistakes in the story but overall great read"

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Alpha's Mistake

"Fantastic story with twists that keep you guessing. Quick plot changes that keep you wanting to read more and more. Great story!"

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Alphas mistake

"This book is so nice and the plot is making sense. Good work. Keep it up "

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Loved it

"I loved this story. There is an amazing friendship between Willow and Patti. Sisters to the end. I love how the issues between them is not because he is a player, but due to other things. I believe each character is portrayed splendidly, and that the emotions felt by a pregnant human with a werewolf baby in these situations is very logical and def believable."

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Pack love

"To much blood in it"

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The Alphs's Mistake

"Great story!"

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Finally a great reaction

"I am so glad that this story had a realistic reaction for a human. Personally, I didn't see any growth in the human Willow until the last couple of chapters......the author really did a great job on the characters. You may read it and feel that Willow grew much earlier. This author rocks and I will continue to read her work. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED FOR YOU TO READ!!"

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the alpha's mistake

"the story is nice. the alpha and the luna seems have misunderstanding first but gladly they kiss and make up. hoping to read more interesting stories"

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Alphas mistake

"Aww really good I'm glad they finally became a proper family at last. They deserve it. "

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Alpha's Mistake

"Author as always you're Amazing! 😍😘☺️☺️"

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Alpha mistake

"I love werewolf stories. I never read where the mate is human. However I enjoyed this one . Could not keep it down."

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