What is your opinion?
Great Start
"I am loving this story. It's different from the rest. Nice job. Can't wait for the next update"
Good Start
"This is a really promising start. The Plot seems interesting and your intro hooked the readers in. The nervousness displayed by Eli was understandable given the newfound environment. Watch out for overusing certain words and nouns because they can become dry/boring, having a negative impact on the readers. Also, ellipses (...) are three dots instead of two but also should be used sparingly. Aside from a few grammatical errors, this is a promising start and the beginning of what seems like a cute story. Keep writing!"
Good start
"I really enjoyed reading this first chapter! Although I noticed a few grammatical errors, I don’t think anyone can be perfect with those:) I hope you continue to write more as I continue to read more! I’m not the best critic, but I’m just giving my honest opinion. The plot is really enjoyable and leads up to a fine storyline with very lovable characters. Please do not give up on this story, I think it will do great!"
