"Ketchup on the Camera Lens"

"SpaceCat97, Still waiting for the reason there was Ketchup on the lens. A bit more development might help your story catch the interests of readers representing many Genres. Developing the Characters, describing the environment surrounding the story, building the ending, or plot being exposed, some mystery in your fantasy to excite your readers and keep them interested in your work......... ..I realize this is a thumbnail sketch and for that reason, compliments are due for your submission to the world, of your short story. Now that you are getting known as a writer, give the world your best shot, and thrill the rest of the readers to learn who you are, and when your next book will be published and in the stores to buy.............continue your work........good stuff. william elliott kern"