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Mr. Hill

"I loved the suspense and I'm dieing to see more details like how did Lucy die and what happened to all of Mr. Hill's other "slaves". "

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I LOVE AND HATE AT THE SAME TIMEE jk

"I hate and love it"

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Good story plot . Fun read

"The story definitely focuses on submissive and dominant theme. It shows a complicated relationship and there is good character development. "

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I like it

"I really like because it is spicy and interesting and I enjoy the plot very much I will like the second part of the story "

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One of the best so far

"This is something new and exactly what I was looking for and it's one of the best so far. Great Work 👍🏼👏🏼"

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Loved it

"The ending"

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A* love it

"🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂"

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Mr hill

"Wooooow this is one of the amazing novel I have read in my entire life . everything in it is perfect"

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Mr Hill

"Book is awesome. Im not a ready but im reading this book and im loving it. Kemily and i have the same attitude . This book is amazing , i love it ! "

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Different..and I love it!

"Got to say....definitely different and thought maybe wouldn't like it but surprisingly, can't seem to get enough of it..."

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Mr Hill

"Just finish the book Missy!!!"

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I don't know

"Nice book well draughts but the abuse is unbelievable and shox "

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I love it so much, you should continue it. I wanna know wat Mr. Hill and Kemily relationship will end up?! Will they live?! Will Lucy get her revenge for her sister?! Will Mr. Hill be able to make things right?! I thirst for more, please I'm begging you the suspicion is killing me!!! 😖😖🤗🤗🤗

"Everything was absolutely perfect, I would recommend it to my girlfriends to spice up their lives, and I chose to rate it five stars, bcs I was on edge, heat, and curious about the next chapter. The cliffhanger is awesome but I thirst for more pretty pleas!!!"

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Great

"It seems really good so far. Just dark enough to tap into that forbidden pleasure realm. "

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OMG nooo we need more!

"Is there a 2nd book?!? OMG we need more. Lol. Great great story, so many twist and turns 🥰 love it pls tell me there's more or another book. Great book"

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Mr hill

"Awesome plot so far. Keeps us wanting more"

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Very good, but not steamy.

"I really like this story… but there are so many errors. So many times sighted was used instead of sighed… Great writing style, just need an editor to help you! I’m open to it if you want me to! "

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Creepy af but why am I sympathetic?

"Please update soon!!! "

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I need more !!!!! Please update soon

"Please update sooon pleaseeeeeeeeeee"

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doomsday

"i liked all of it"

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