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My masters from hell

"Very enjoyable story and characters that share humor and caring. Lovely 😍, enjoying the influence of South Africa. "

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My masters from hell

"It has an amazing story line, and it's extremely addictive to read. It has a few grammatical errors here and there, bit its nothing you can't correct in your head. The use of a different language is beautiful."

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Yes

"I liked it very much....i love it in fact...it is very funny and has got nice plot twists "

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Worth the read

"This story is by far the most greatest stories i have read so far. I love how everything ties together and how their bond is super strong! Keep up the good work 👍🏼👍🏼"

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Amazing story

"Great how their relationship is evolving. I also like it how the story is both sweet and hot"

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Review

"I like how you showed that the girl- forgot name-; but the main one, want afraid of the public’s opinion. That she could stand up for herself but that she still needed comfort from the guys. "

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Masters from hell

"Why is it always a virgin in these stories? Irl I had a hard time getting dates or more when was 18+ and still virgin. Til I met my ex very bad long marriage. Men didn't seem to notice me or be attracted to me til I was married and unavailable."

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Yvonne

"Better than most. Some too much like 50 Shades of Grey. Seems to be a trend. Needs more bondage/ S&M"

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love

"it is a good novel really like it"

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Interesting

"Sometimes the writing is a little difficult to follow, though I noticed most of the chapters say "unedited" so I don't judge that to harshly. It seems like it will definitely need a rewrite to help with the flow of the story line, it almost seems like Lisa became a different person overnight, like the author decided so change a few things about the character that the earlier chapters don't reflect. I would have liked for some of the details to be added earlier into the story. Like the setting or more of her background. I'm hooked reading this now, but if there were so many "daddies" in the start I wouldn't have bothered. I know that's normal for some people and here and there isn't so bad, but it weirds me out. It's hard not to imagine her as a child when she's all daddy this daddy that. There are a lot of great aspects to this story though it just needs some polishing. I would still recommend it."

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