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What is your opinion?
Very interested so far
"It seems like the story is progressing slowly so far, but I'm really interested to read more! There are maybe some things which are unnecessary and don't bring much value to the story and this can lead to it feeling like it's dragging on, but it also brings some detail to the story."
In response to your feedback request
"I have to admit, I had a hard time reading this story as I generally avoid anything written in present tense unless it's temporary or extremely descriptive which might draw me in. That said, I think you have a very clean, neat writing style that can make this kind of perspective work. if you can give readers a reason to continue along."
