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Summary

Random poems penned down, by my mood swings. Some sad, some happy, some long, some short. A compilation of my random poems on random thoughts.❤

Genre
Poetry
Author
Stardust
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
7
Rating
5.0 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

I keep waiting

Starry night, shining up the night sky,

Beautiful moon, placed up so high.

Looking up, a teardrop leaves my eye,

Thinking about you, I take a sigh.

The promise of our love, is on the ridge,

Something sinister is breaking our bridge.

I try to hold on to you, but I slip,

It's my heart, which you rip.

Tonight is the last we would meet,

From tomorrow, we would never greet.

I keep pretending to love you very much,

But you do know the truth, it is such.

I have to confess the truth tonight,

Maybe from tomorrow I won't get your sight.

I know it's painful for us to part,

But we have to be strong at heart.

Maybe you already left me here,

I know it's the pain in your heart, you can't bear.

But I do keep hoping to see you, i keep waiting.........

By the shiny lake, on a starry night,

I keep waiting to get your sight.

It's your presence, which gets me expecting,

I keep waiting..........


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reader_freak_o

this was written exceptionally well. Poems comprises of many emotions in a few words and I was able to catch the emotions you wanted to convey. The rhyming you have add was fitting and meaningful. I really liked it... 🥰🥰.

6 years
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Deleted User
Deleted User

loved this one the thought that went into the story behind it and you made it rhyme. 👏👏👏 nice

6 years
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Brielle
Brielle

this is soo beautiful!

6 years
1

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