Inkitt
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Great start

"This can be amazing... during sex scenes, use more descriptions of the act it shows the reader ...instead of telling. You have a great start of a good story"

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Lovely short story 😍

"Worth to read!! No drama and has beautiful happy ending 😍 . Although there are several errors in letter (i thought it's typo) but i could manage to understand it. Thanks for sharing this amazing book with us, Author 😊🌹🌹🌹 "

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