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the Fortress Can Win

"I enjoyed this book. There was plenty of strong language and life savings and killings. I just wish the romance had worked out in the end."

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Iron Roundup

"I really enjoyed the characters. Their interactions are believable and totally human. At this rate, though it looks like "Sniper Girl" is going to score more kills than Matt Dillon did in 20 years in Gun smoke! Then again, I can live with that! Looking forward to the next one in the series. "

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Iron Roundup

"Another brilliant story. Absolutely loved it. The banter between the Sarge and Rane is fantastic "

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Iron Roundup

"This book had me drawn right inside it again. The suspense is so detailed written, one would think you, Haley, is Allison in real life. Down to the smallest detail, like I have never come across in any other suspense story. Amazing. Now I suppose I have to go into the follow up, which will be the last of the available series. Yes, I did not read the series in sequence. Well done yet again."

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Amazing story

"I finished this book in 1 day. This book is amazing. "

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Iron Roundup

"Really like your writing style and your political beliefs lol. I believe we could get along. Nicely done"

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Another great read!

"I'm a tough critic of writing styles and punctuation/grammar - having been a teacher in the past. But this was damn close to a perfect 5 stars for me. Took a couple of hits for the rare punctuation/grammar/typo I came across, and I found there was a bit too much repetition of things for my taste. (Maybe something to do with me reading it pretty much all at once?) Overall loved it and looking forward to reading the next one - after a short break. Thanks for all your hard work!"

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Great

"Love this series "

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Outstanding

"What a story so engaging and lots of action "

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“Outstanding “!

"Your imagination is off the charts. Hank you so much for sharing what goes on in your twisted, but creative mind!"

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Iron roundup

"Bloody brilliant sequel, great story, and exciting action. Really funny bit especially when Allison is winding up Sarge! Had me laughing out loud 🤣🤣. Kick arse characters 👍🏻😁"

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Gripping

"Absolutely exciting read."

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Great Sequel

"The second installment of the Allison Rate saga is just as good (if not better) than the first. All our favorite characters return in another exciting, non-stop thrill ride. The plot revolves about dealing with the 1% MC as they really are, not as they appear in countless internet story lines. Well done!!!!"

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Excellent!

"Another good one. I couldn’t put it down. Keep up the good work!"

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I have work tomorrow but can’t stop reading

"Love the characters and the action. Can’t wait to see how it plays out!"

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Excellent as all of her books

"I really enjoy the writing style as well as the content cactus wait to start the next book"

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