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My voice

"Love it char n Ian need to end up together"

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Need MOOOOOORE

"Amazing twists and turns!! Main character is such a bad ass!!! I love this tale of damaged people crashing into each other! Dark & sexy!! Please, I need more!!!"

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Fantastic storytelling

"I am hooked on this story! The characters are insanely interesting. Charlize is very much a gritty La femme Nakita character with a really sharp tongue and will to survive. I am looking forward to more chapters ASAP please!"

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The plot is well-thought-out

"The plot of the story was thought-out well and kept the reader's attention. Would like to know how the story progresses from here."

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salivate

"love. Can't wait for more"

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Awesome

"Beautiful writing and story! 🥰"

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Salivste

"This book gives incite as to why some very smart young people have the attitudes they have. A terrible life that they grew up with that they hide very well. The story is well written.I I will recommend this story to a few of my friends that enjoy reading on line. "

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Salivate

"Pretty good so far. The plot of the story is interesting. The characters are well defined & strong. I'm looking forward to reading where this goes. Thank you."

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Midnight Toxicity

"Why have an ending like this? Thought there'll be more to the story not an ending like this! It feel like story is incomplete "

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Reader

"It has too many unnecessary details. And what's up with the recipes in between chapter? The narrative was too simple. "

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Okay

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