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Virgie's Take

"It took forever to realize the story's plot. It seemed like our kidnapped girl was so socially stunted that she acted aloof about her predicament. Once her true identity was revealed, her attitude was justified."

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Loved it ❤️

"Excellent n great story loved all characters ❤️ awesome book"

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Stuck with her Vampire mate

"Good romantic, adventure story with TONS OF twists and turns!!! Well written author 😊 !!❤️ and ✝️🛐 s, mom "

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Loved it so much.

"I loved this novel. I recommend it to everyone. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did."

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Love it

"Love this…."

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Loved it

"Lovely book, well done. 👍🤗"

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Stuck with my vampire mate

"I absolutley loved the book!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤"

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Loved it😭😭😭😭😭😭 but now it's over.

"Loved love love love love love love❤❤❤❤❤"

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Vampire Mate

"What a wonderful story, want to go back and start it again, keep up the great writing "

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She wolf and the vampire

"I love the story it's exciting and has suspense.Didn't want to stop reading it."

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Good

"Suspence super theam eager to read "

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Nice story line

"The story is beautiful 💓 but dear author u need to correct some mistakes . There are some few mistakes which needs your attention grammatical mistakes , narration issue who said this to whom . When I read the few pages I got confused what actually happened in the story , but after reading furthermore I found the storyline interesting . When everyone found that atarah is the "fire goddess" that part of the story is captivating🔥. Some of the parts of the story was quick , (way too much)and some was slow. Although I would say " I LOVED YOUR STORY" and i am looking forward for more of your amazing stories. "ALL THE BEST"👍👍👍👍."

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LOVE THIS BOOK

"This book was so awesome. Atarah is an amazing character surrounded by amazing supporting cast. "

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Love it!

"I really love this book so far!"

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Stuck with my vampire mate

"Its a very good story! The ending not just like fairytale where everything should be good. The end how reality end. It a happy ending and make you feel good,happy and satified once you finish reading. Then you want to read more. I dislike some name same as in twilight cause its make me think author want to follow that story. But don't worry, its a different story. Have a good time reading this story.💕💕"

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I love thisbook

"I enjoyed reading thisbook.I couldn’t stop reading it love everything about it"

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Its awesome

"I laughed for the most part of it . The writer did great"

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Love!

"I love this book !!! Great characters great plot !!!"

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Stuck with my vampire mate

"Wonderful book would definitely like to see more books like this."

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Stuck with my vampire mate

"I just love this book ......very nice story if u disregard the grammatical errors and I disregard that ...I loved it and I couldn't stop reading once I started ..plzz keep writing such more wonderful stories"

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