Inkitt
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Yaneth

"Wow. I can't wait to read book 2.🙌🙌🙌"

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The roaming alpha

"Wow!! Quite the adventure!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Great story

"I loved this story "

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The roaming alpha

"Fantastic story! Highly recommend "

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Its a entertaining read

"Looking forward to the next book "

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The Roaming Alpha

"Such a great story. I can't wait to read the next one!!"

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Ryker metacor Jillian Jess

"Great story’s! Now I want to know what happens next "

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I couldn't put it down

"I was on the edge of my seat during most of this fast paced story. I can't wait to read book 2!"

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Fantastic story

"Very good story. Enjoyed it thoroughly. "

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Thrilling story....do give a name

"Thrilling. Kept me captivated. What I don't understand is why did Jessara not use her ability to fight when she is a warrior? Well now she is a Luna as well as Queen Luna, so maybe in the next book she can have a better personality using her fighting techniques? Will ask many if my friends to read. Loved reading ... Want more"

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Roaming Alpha

"Fast paced storyline that didn’t disappoint. Very well written villains and definitely had me calling for a pitchfork party! Happy to hear there is a sequel as I need some more of the story. 😁"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Great writing!

"I am a fan of werewolves and Lycan books. Your ideas and stories are well put together . The best thing I like about your stories is the story line does not drag but yet they are not too fast. It develops at a perfect speed where you get to know the characters in the story, and you’re not like what just happened and try to go back a few chapters to see if you missed anything. Thank you for the great stories and please keep doing what you’re doing."

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Great 👍

"I love 💘 your books. "

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Very good story

"There are alot of errors but I really like the story. I really like it when someone steps up and takes in a kid that is not theirs."

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The Roaming Alpha

"Loving this book has an excellent plot very strong characters lots of twist and turns very exciting book. "

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Great

"This book is great. I absolutely love the story line and all the suspense. It will leave you hooked and reading for more. You love the characters. Especially baby rikar! Recommended to my sister and cousin "

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Great

"A really good story. "

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Great read

"I love this book"

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The roaming alpha

"Absolutely amazing book from beginning to end completely loved it can't wait for book 2 💖"

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