57 chapters read
"Love the story, felt sadness for Bloom and angry at the same time, but not sad at all for alpha Danger's brother for being an ass wipe."
57 chapters read
"The storyline was great. I was a little lost in the beginning but it all made sense! "
57 chapters read
"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"
57 chapters read
"Whisper when you have the time and everything is pretty much settled and things are going a little bit better for you could you please write more to this book it was really good but they are still missing a couple of the children that she had and I want to see what happens to all of them Brandon needs to find his sisters and his other brothers along the way find out what happens to Julie and if she finds her mate and everybody else their children their grandchildren stuff like that it's a good book and I love every one of them"
57 chapters read
"I love the story. Strong women are always a plus. I did get a little confused as who was talking; in parts Family, love, pain, strength I would tell friends about this story Thank you for telling the story."
57 chapters read
"Love whispers books she writes well and her storie plots are pretty good "
57 chapters read
"I Loved This Story! The Characters Have Amazing Depth! Are There Any Plans On Turning This Story Into A Series? If So I Would Greatly Enjoy It!"
57 chapters read
"Absolutely amazing I hope there is more to come "
1 chapters read
"So far it's good. I like the twists."
57 chapters read
"This book covers it all. Rejected mates, wolves that lives for hundreds of years, war and rebirth of wolves."
57 chapters read
"The storyline idea was good but it was way to hard to follow. It was difficult to know who was talking and thus what was happening. Basic editing would help. Brandon's name was spelled several different ways and several typos occurred that would be easily caught. Typos aside, there were other things that were written wrong... example would be the distance from Alpha Rages pack to the castle. Once I read it was more than a thousand miles away, another time is was hundreds of miles and then later it only was a two hour drive. All that aside, this a what I call a fantasy read with good potential. Wolves lived thousands of years, at times put into a long term sleep and would have memories erased (which are retstored later), and family members are lost. This easily could be divided into two or three books where character development could be enhanced as well as giving more depth to what is happening or going to happen. Again, the plot idea is good. It just needs editing and split into more than one book. That would keep the story on plot and keep the slow parts from dragging on and on. "
3 chapters read
"This is almost impossible to follow. I can never tell who is talking or if someone actually is speaking or if it's just a defining paragraph. I mean... you're writing is just so fractured and most of your paragraphs and sentences just run together making the plot nearly impossible to follow. From what I was able to make out from your writing it seems as though you have a very good story but your lack of almost any punctuation and paragraph/dialogue structure prevent it from being easily readable. Please don't give up though you really have something here so perhaps invest in word/grammar app that will assist you in corrections? Can't wait for the edit. "