Cute

"I really like your main character, she's got that sweet side, but is also tough. It makes her come across as both cute and daring. The story line feels as if it's lacking direction a little bit, it would be cool to see some more build up to dramatic scenes or problems that she may face in her home life/school life. I like your writing style, you use some really dynamic speech tags and desciptive language! Keep it up, your doing really good!"