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Desire of the heart: beginnings

"I love how the relationship had a steady pace. It didn't feel rushed, and I love how the author included the scriptures and how Sierra and Grayson applied them to their lives. I don't dislike anything about this book."

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Love It

"I hope you write a sequel to this. Love how you related verses to what happened in the story. Loved how you showed overcoming adversity with the counsel of the wise. Love how you showed that with the guidance of God much can be achieved. Thank you for writing this styof light. Keep up the good work."

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Greysone

"Well written and captivating. Avoid the repetions though"

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