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"I'm so sorry to hear about your health. I agree sometimes you definitely to take a mental health break. I'm hoping you get to feeling better. I enjoyed this story so far very much. I can hardly wait for the rest. Take care of yourself and update when you are ready. I'll wait for your updates patiently just get better "

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Let's Play

"Jessica and Damien fit together. While this story was good I feel we need more. Please update so we know what happens after the hospital and whether or not they find Darla and if Elijah is good and if he's willing to hear Damien out about why he was really taken from his dad. "

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More stories

"I love it Came twive"

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Great book

"This book is the best every chapter leaves you wanting more"

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Love this book

"I love the way you write!"

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Loved the story

"Best book ever …thanks to you author "

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Let's play

"Very nice. Not many writings Keep me interested but your work did , Keep it up. Would love to see more chapters or new stories from you "

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THANK U

" Thank u for a amazing Novel and take a break we will wait for new chapters and also mental health matters girly eat well and sleep well."

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Fantastic

"I loved reading this. Really hope that you get to finish it. But your mental and physical health come first and I hope you are doing well. "

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Would love to know more…

"Would love to continue reading Damien & Jess’ story, but not at your mental health’s expense.. Your health is, and must always be, a priority!!! Take a breath, we’ll all be here to continue with you when you’re ready. You’re not alone, it takes a village…"

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Thaml ylou for sharing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Be strong your work is wonderful and helps at lot people with mental health issues like myself forget there problem for a while. So thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Wow, brilliant

"Thank you for sharing your book. I completely fell in love with it."

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Let's play

"Would really like to know what happens next update chapters soon please 🙏"

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want more

"Get well soon! Self care is always #1. Looking forward to read the rest of this story. "

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Take good care of you! ❤️

"I'm sorry to hear you've been having such a rough time. You're story is wonderful! If I get more, hooray! If not, I'm still sending you lots of love! 🥰🥰🥰"

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Great story

"Enjoyed this book, from start to finish "

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Let’s play

"LOVED IT! LOVED IT!LOVED IT! Loved it! LOVED IT! Had a few grammatical errors (like I’m the one to talk) buuuuut still amazing none the less "

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Lets' play

"Wow!! Loved it thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Let's play

"So beautiful how 2 closed heart can open for the right peeson"

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Let’s play

"Love love love it "

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