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Loved it

"Short,sweet and loving story.Good work Author."

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Goddess did it again! Amazed us!

"I savoured e.ve.ry bit of words, expressions, dialogues, hot scenes, cute toddler moments and new characters. Going straight to Rose’s story! Please!! 💚Keep your fantastic parallel world alive for us! 🩷❤️🧡💛💗"

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Loved it

"Honestly, one of top favourite picks. I loved it, even if it's short I still enjoyed it, it's not really fast paced it was okey. I really enjoyed. I can't wait to read more of your books. "

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🥰🥰🥰

"An amazing story, very touching and full of love 🥰"

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"I really like this book "

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Chef Quiroz

"Love this! I never hated Michel in Twisted Thomas since his ex did had a part of why he was broken like that. Glad Michel got his happy ever after , of course, the family he's meant to have and deserves. Great short story, highly recommended. Thanks Author.❤️💯"

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I loved the banter between Michal and Nina. How they got out of their own way to just feel and not let the past derail their love for each other.

"I love the banter between Michal and Nina. How they let go of the past and fell in love with each other."

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Chef Quiroz

"This was an amazing story. The last epilogue was so heartbreaking 💔 it brought back the most devastating day for me and my family, when we watched our Mom take her last breath "

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Chef Quiroz

"Life is so hard. Michel and Nina had it tough. Out of it they became better for themselves and others. I guess I feel very encouraged after reading this story. I felt wonderful reading it. "

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Chef Quiroz

"OK I'm not going to lie, I didn't expect to like this story, I didn't like Michel from Tracy's story, but I'm glad we got a better understanding of him and that he got to be happy in the end"

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"Loved the book! Can't wait for more!! Great plot, different and great story!"

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This series is SO worth it.🖤

"Reading your books is basically like watching a crazy good TV series. That's like.. going on for 10 seasons, so you even get the chance to follow the kids of the first generation, being all adult and stuff. In case you're into book series this one will keep you occupied for quite a while. And let me tell you: It's so WORTH IT! To start from the beginning as well. Not a single book has disappointed or was less gripping for that matter. Thanks to the books overlapping you get to know people from different angles. Getting a pretty good impression on each and every character even though there might not be a book solely dedicated to them. Idk how you came up with all those unique and intriguing characters - it's magic. And so much fun to read!! Im sorry if this review isn't all that informative. I'm just in love, I guess. 😄🤷🏻‍♀️ Your books make me laugh and cry, all hot and bothered but also reflect in all seriousness about feelings and, well, life in general. They've got it all. For real. It's a gem. Your loss if you don't give it a shot."

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Chef Quiroz

"This is actually one of my favourite short stories! We saw Michel in an earlier book, and he wasn't a favourite character - but in this book, we realize he was just with the wrong girl! I love all the heated banter of the 2 hot headed characters, but mostly the sweet moment they get together after what seems like forever! Also, it was SOOO much fun reading some of the flirting in Spanish, the first time the Goddess uses a difference language in her books and it was sooo refreshing ❤️ ❤️ Definitely worth a read, and a reread!"

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Chef Quiroz

"so where do I start, I was team Quiroz since twisted Thomas and I am not disappointed. This story really showed us who Quiroz is and how he is. Its a lovely story and I think I have read it twice already."

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Chef Quiroz

"Really enjoyed hearing about Michel! "

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Chef Quiroz!!!!!

"Fantastic!!!! I read this story on a whim and got totally immersed in the characters lives. I went on to read all the rest of Goddess’ books! One of the best authors in Inkitt!! Seriously amazing!! Everyone should read!!!! "

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Another great story. The series is a must!

"Great story, great plot. Love it all. "

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Loved it!

"Read them all in order. Great work. I'm glad he got his happy ending. "

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Quinoz

"Finally Michel has found his missing rib "

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Sweet, short story

"Not the usual lengthy story that Godess Hedone most of the time writes but still a great story."

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