What is your opinion?
"Seeking Hope: A Fairytale"
"Good Story line with the Plot following in line. Your Character development and surrounding incedenial surroundings well described. Being only 3 Chapters at this time completed, this review should be revisited when your book/story is completed, for your benefit..........but to the point, mixing different languages with some translations and some not, ie; censored, will slow the story down and make it more cumbersome to follow. I understand your point, for further expression, however, your story will suffer as the readers tries to assimilate the digression from the main theme, while continuing with the story. Grammar is a bit rough in part and perhaps taking the time to edit your work will eliminate this minor issue..........but it needs to be done before submittal..........now.......you are a fine writer with good instincts, writing skills and creativity. continue to wow the world with your thinking, stories and plots achieved with vigor.............very good work "almostawkward" william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 please review my Book Dead or Alive"
seeking hope, a fairy tale
"I love this story! it kept my interest, love the plot it has lots of twist and turns, the characters are interesting and complex. Great detail in in describing the settings it is like watching a movie and I can't wait to read more.!"
