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ETHAN PHILLIPS

"Bonjour lecteurs, C’est une belle et émouvante histoire. J’ai trop aimé et je l’ai lu d’un trait. Je n’ai pas vu de commentaires ou presque pas, et je n’en ai pas laissé, parce que je dévorais cette histoire, Mais je n’ai pas oublié les cœurs à chaque chapitre rouge et le noir.. Bonne lecture ************************* "Hello readers, It's a beautiful and moving story. I liked it too much and I read it in one sitting. I didn't see any comments or almost none, and I didn't leave any, because I was devouring this story, but I haven't forgotten the hearts in each red and black chapter. Louvette"

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Ethan Phillips

"Wonderful story, wonderful characters. I enjoyed reading your story so much. Keep on writing 🥰"

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Tastefully written

"Dear author, You did an amazing job withsuch a touchy issue. The story had very descriptive scenarios and wasn't too long winded. Good job. Despite a few grammatical and spelling errors the piece was comprehendable and nothing was taken away from making this a great piece of writing. "

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Loved it

"Very good story."

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Great book

"Love the drama"

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Awesome

"Was a good story. Enjoyed the story line and the characters. Thank you for sharing with us ❤️"

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Liked it

"I really liked this story. Its sad that they stayed far from each other for so long but in the end they had their happily ever after.. I liked the writing and the emotions i got from this. 🙂"

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Good Storytelling

"Is there supposed to be an update. Quite frankly I loved the story and right at this point is a great ending! Great job!"

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Fgg

"A very emotional book"

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Helpful criticism

"What I love about this book is the storyline am in love however I hate the development for example like where did her mother go the book skipp3d a couple years and we still don't know if she form out the truth. I would recommend this book to anybody because of the the storyline but to nobody based on how the author develops the characters and plot it's not adding up right. I am not doing this to bash the write it is because I see potential in this book big potential many times I want to stop reading but i can't. It is a good book reach out to me i can share a few pointers and help with editing . KEEP ON WRITING "

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no thanks

"it’s all over the place plot is a hot mess and the dialogue is so cringe worthy. grammar and punctuation not bad tho"

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