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The Fallen Crown, Amaya X.

"I mainly wrote to encourage the author, a little cheer on. I'm realizing that my massive "comment" ended up in the title area, major fail on that. I hope it goes thru. I like everything about the book. Theres a good amount of feeling like your going to be sick over the situation the main girl has to go thru!! Finding love, then realizing that person causes your best friend to be utterly harmed.. it guts you. I'm not going to go thru the parts of the book, that would take away others chances on getting rooted into the story and to give their hearts to the well thought out characters in the book. Every character holds their own, in making you fall in love with their setting in life. The suspense is insane!! Thanks for sharing your talent with the test of us!!! Okay, I was able to paste my original comment that I had typed into the title part. Awesome it worked, but keep in mind.. or be forewarned.. its a lotta lot of reading!! Amaya X this is my first "comment" to an author. I have read many books on here and have enjoyed numerous ones. So my lack of comments is on me and just not reaching out. I wanted to say thank you for being brave and raw about where you are at this moment in life. You'll have many along the way, some meh ones, rocky emotional ones..and some that delight you soo much. Its the delightful ones that touch our hearts and makes us feel undefeated that make us grab life and the joys it can bring. I am sorry you had heaps of trauma happen to you, sounds like they were too close to get a proper upright position. You have a beautiful mind, you craft your stories in a way that it reaches the bones of tragedy, but shows glimpses and peaks of special reasons to laugh inbetween. I am really rooting for your character to reach her desitination, hopefully with a good ending. Because, even though life can punch you, we all want to have our happy ending and to see the people that keep standing up, who we root for, to experience success. You keep trotting along and don't let the puddles in life hold back your growth! You have remarkable potential, climb back into your center of joy, you deserve happiness. "

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I think you are doing a great job!

"You are a great writer and I would love to continue reading this story. Take all the time you need! I hope everything gets better for you. "

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Amazing

"A great book as far as I've read if you have not already, go read the first book 😍😍"

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Wonderful

"I've been waiting so long for this book to be released. Simply wonderful and very dark "

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