Very good potential!

"Great potential. This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is very engaging simple and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. I can't find any fault in your grammar and such which is a wonderful thing! I'm aware that it isn't exactly finish, which is the reason why I haven't rate it higher, though when it's done I may read it over again. Overall this is a pretty good story so far and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings. "