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Ravenbane

"Fascinatingly brilliant! What an imagination the Author has. 👍👍👍"

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Well done

"This is such an good fantasy tale with good amounts of lore and world building. The details and rules of the world make sense (something that isn't easy to do when you're creating an original world - as I seen from other novels) and make for an incredibly enticing story and world. The characters are well defined and there was ample detail to give me a clear picture of what was happening without having these details be overwhelming. There were some mistakes in spelling and grammar, yet they are minor mistakes and don't distract from the story. Overall, you done such an amazing job on the story you built. There's so much going on that keeps you intrigued and engaged and I would really recommend this for anyone who's into fantasy such as this."

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