Inkitt
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Loved it

"I loved the story, the plot, the characters, it all went along so seamlessly and kept me interested. There were some grammatical errors but not enough to take away from the story. I enjoy short stories and this one was the perfect length but I agree with others, it's one story that would be great as a continuation. Once again, wonderful story. "

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Muy buena

"Linda historia y bien escrita"

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❤️❤️

"Love it all"

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❤️❤️

"Love it all"

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Into the Light

"I really enjoyed this story, I was sad when it ended, as I could have kept reading about the protagonists’ lives. Good character development, and well-paced. x"

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Too short

"I was able to get involved in the story enough that I was sad to see the end. I think the story touched the subject of abuse with the sensitivity that it deserves along with how it affects the thought process and actions of the abused. I would suggest having someone proofread each chapter as you finish it so that they may catch missing words, spelling or grammar mistakes along with punctuation (commas) that can affect the thought process or impact of a word(s). Look forward to reading more of your stories."

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into the Light

"I really liked this book! I love most of the characters and i’m gonna miss them. There is a lot of grammar and spelling issues but it’s still easy to read. Would have liked to know what Eli’s luna felt about what he was doing especially since she would have been possessive and in pain!! All in all a good book, thank you, please keep writing and i’m off to share!! "

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Great read

"and would read again, hope there’s more from the author in future "

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Into the light

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Fab

"Absolutely loved this book, characters are great storyline is interesting "

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Into the light

"I liked it. Different from any other wolf novel that i have read. Excellent!"

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Loved this so much!!!!

"This has got to be one of my absolute favorite stories now. Loved this so much!!!!"

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Into The Light

"It's a good story but very sad. Hoping she gets her happy ending. Had difficulty putting it down."

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Great story

" So far so good. The main characters reactions are genuine and true to what would be going on in real life. This is well thought out. Impressive "

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Into the light

"Not so often do I read this genre of story, but I enjoy the way this author writes and couldn't resist! I was not let down. Author did a great job with the characters and plot, along with the suspense and tears...I loved reading it, finishing it only too quickly!"

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Good one

"I enjoyed it really, but it felt like there were little wholes in the plot. Like it was a bit rushed, so I can not feel the characters, like they are from fairy tail. It would be great if we can see more details, a bit background for the main bit, a bit insight into the antagonist personalities. Otherwise, it is a heart wrenching but also heartwarming short story, which leaves sweet aftertaste despite the violence scenes. "

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Great Read

"I absolutely loved this story found it hard to put the book down. Well done!"

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Love this book

"Enjoying this book alot"

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Great writing

"The book was extremely well written. The plot stayed in point throughout the entire novel."

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I loved that she didn't drag the story. It was a very good read.

"I love that she didn't dragged the story."

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