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Love

"I like the plot of the story, and the characters having real issues"

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Couldn't put it down

"This was amazing story. I couldn't put it down. I can't wait to read book 2 "

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Story

"Love this story. Great writing. I hope Issac kicks the crap outta his brother."

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Great book!

"I really liked this book! It’s well written and didn’t leave anything out. I laughed I cried, Delilah is a great character. I hope u write more about her. "

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Review

"Wow is all I can say. What a roller coaster ride"

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Oh come on....

"This is absolutely frustrating!!! Great story but if you are planning to move your story or it's sequels to another platform then let readers know that at the beginning. ABSOLUTELY FRUSTRATING to get so invested in a storyline just to find out that the rest of it has been moved to another platform,app or kindle. And the editing in this story needs A LOT of work!!! Ex. You wrote that Del and Nate meet Issac at the sunset spot and that Jay is with Issac then a few sentences later you say Isaac made Jay stay back at the clubhouse.... continuity please. And then there's all the grammar, figures of speech and phrases that weren't correctly done. I'm sure this review will get me blocked by the author but this was frustrating. "

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Crossfire MC

"Great so far. I haven't finished reading it. Caught my attention from the start."

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Love this book!

"Definitely a book that will have you on edge, make you cry, mad, and excited. Great Job and I look forward to part 2."

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Crossfire mc

"I found your story and style refreshing, inspired, and different from the other MC oriented stories. I really appreciated details like correct spelling, grammar, punctuation, and even keeping consistent plot lines. Thank you "

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Love the writing very captivating

"Such a great story, I cant wait to see what else you put out. This book deserves to be published."

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Truly Enchanting

"I love this story and can't wait for you to write more. It's easy to overlook small errors when the story is so captivating. I plan to buy the book when it's published to have a hard copy! "

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Good read

"Its a good read easy to follow. I like the characters and also the twists and turns."

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Omg 💖💖💖💖💖

"I fucking love this please please dont ever stop writing. "

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Crossfire MC Dark Romance

"I haven’t been able to put this one down. Jay and she shared more than a one night stand. They have to get closure since they lost a baby they didn’t know they had. I can’t wait for more chapters. "

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Love It!!!

"Love It!!!!!!! Wish there was more "

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One of my favorite

"Love this story and love your writing.. please more updates ❤️ and happy Easter 🐰 "

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Crossfire

"She needs to pick one and stick with him but fuck I love this story. I tip my hat to the author well done."

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Loved it!

"Enjoyed reading this a great deal. Hope you are still updating or writing another to continue on the storyline. "

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Crossfire mc love story

"Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Hooked

"I started reading this book today and have not been able to put it down. Del is a relatable character who I have fell in love with. I can’t wait to see how this turns out. I can say for sure that this book isn’t predictable and I’m living for it. I need more. "

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