What is your opinion?
So far It's good
"So far It's been good "
Beyond Family
"It’s just starting to get good. Love that the main characters have found each other again. Can’t wait to see how it will end."
Great book
"This book is a great follow up of the first in the series"
A new twist around every corner!
"Good story. Needs to be proofed."
Great story
"I love the character development and plot of the story. "
Good
"Does need proof reading for grammar errors but I like it anyways "
Beyond the family
"Yes its a very good book"
Beyond Family
"the concept is a good concept.. using an outline for both books so far would have helped emmensely with the flow. Keeping notes about each character whether they have a vital role to the book is vital. you contrdict yourself frequently in both books 1 & 2. you do that as well about places and things so you may want to keep notes on that as well. downloading two apps, grammerly and spell check will help with all ( or at least most) of your spelling errors and grammatical errors, which there are ALOT of. which also adds to the confusion. But what was really iritating about this book was that in the description it said that this was book 2 of 3. yet this book is unfinished!!! or i hope it is, bc as insanely sporatic, and as many unanswered questions, and underdeveloped characters, with as many deviations from he plot that it took, at least it eventually got somewhere. there was notthing of any substance in his book. Brooklyn wants too be turned does that ever happen, does her son ever shift?, the heroine was tricked into mating with a vampire that is supposed to last a liftime but she killed him, does that have any ramifications? her father said her wolf was dead, but obviously it isn't so what oher lies has he told her? what is the council going to punish them with this time? And more importantly what about her being pregnant with a purebred vampire's baby!!? what other tangent are you going to send us on? if you haven't finished a book please don't post it.. it's VERY infuriating to read a few chapers only to find out it's only partially there."
Awsome
"I'm really liking the storyline so far.i would like to ntinue to read more"
Beyond Family
"This book is so good!"
Need more!!😁😁
"Ok so, what happened with Vincent was disgusting to me and left me feeling pretty bitter after reading it, and their blatant disregard for her marriage to Payton was rather enraging. Also, I don’t like the fact that Ruby just left Payton and Rene like that especially being pregnant with Payton’s child. I feel like their relationship was strong enough to handle whatever she needed, but she essentially abandoned them which I think was unnecessary and to have stayed away for a whole year is more then cruel on her part. Getting to know a part of one’s self doesn’t mean you have to forget the part that you already know. Ruby didn’t even get to know her wolf side til Xan mated with her so I just feel like she hadn’t even gotten to know her wolf side fully before she found out about the vamp side and then she just up and ghosted everyone. And because her and Payton are married, he should have been part of the process of her getting to know her other side. I would also just like to say that Payton’s love for Ruby is so rock solid and unwavering that when they were finally reunited it was like a breath skipped a beat….like omg he’s finally reunited with his Luna and the feeling of relief…all those searches and finding nothing and then finally…I feel like that feeling was perfectly conveyed in this chapter it was pretty exhilarating to say the least lol. I also like the fact that she made the decision to hand off her son to Payton before dealing with the situation with her Father. Payton deserves to be with his son regardless of the situation with Ruby and her dad. I just hope she overcomes her feelings of doubt when it comes to Payton, I feel like he has proven more times then any that whatever obstacles they encounter he intends on facing them together, with Ruby, side by side, as husband and wife, and hopefully coming out stronger than ever..together!! What can I say this book has kept me so addicted and wanting more…I can’t help but root for these two to make it 😅😁"
It is awesome
"Love this book I can't wait to read the rest of it I'm excited"
Ts78
"Why am i only getting 7 chapters? It says its a finished book.... im dying to kno what happenes, plz help me figure this app out"
Beyond the family
"found some spelling errors and at one time was supposed to say Payton was her husband but it said Vincent. Was prior to the feeding"
Beyond Family
"I like that the story line is going straight on but keeps you guessing."
Damn! That was basically rape!!
"I can’t believe her father and Vincent did that to her!! Payton is going to kill them both!!"
Beyond Family
"Loved the first book and found this sequel and love it too! "
Where is the rest of the book?
"The book stops very abruptly without feeling complete. Is this a partial book that is still a work in progress?"
Beyond Family
"Honestly, after reading Book 1 on Galatea, and Really enjoying it(!!!), I must say, I am Deeply Disappointed with this... 😞 The writing style is SO different, one 'could' wonder if they both are from the same author... While "Beyond The Pack" (Book 1), is Beautifully written, well paced, and (VERY importantly) grammatically CORRECT!)... - this one seems rushed, erratic, a bit confusing- and has SO MANY SPELLING MISTAKES , and plain GRAMMAR ERRORS, it's shameful... Which is a true pity - as the Story, per se is very catchy and interesting! I do not know, obviously, the reason/s behind this immense Difference, but I would hope that the author does work on this, because there CLEARLY is talent✍🏻 here (not hear) 💜"
Book 2
"How can you ask about this book when it’s not even finished!! Now I’m very disappointed!"
