Inkitt
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"Wow!! Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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His Biggest Mistake

"I enjoyed reading this story very much. "

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Feel Good!!!

"Though there are grammar problems and spelling mistakes, the story is still beautiful and movie worthy. This coulf be a great Hollywood film! 10 stars for you! I just hope you have more chapters with Jared in it like in highschool, his journey in medical school etc. Etc. Would really love to know more about his story."

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"Can't wait to see how it ends!"

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nice book not like others

"the plot was amazing and can really make you realize about things that we often misunderstand in our daily life freedom relationship love well back to the story the characters good i really liked the female character of this story they are strong very much even the female villain i liked the book"

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His biggest mistake

"Wonderful book really enjoyed it 💖🙂"

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His Biggest Mistake

"Forgiveness is the key. Forgive yourself for the wrong decision, forgive those who people who caused so much pain, forgive the past and let go. Everyone deserves second chance by not being together to the man who cheated on you. Being together just for the sake of having a complete family but each and every day the kids can witness that theres no love. "

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Nice story

"Amazing story , wonder how 2+yrs kids can be logical , cud have been better if age is increased to atleast 4+yrs. Same with her business. She was two months pregnant with twins we all know how complicated it can be her. So time line change is appreciated"

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OK

"The lack of proper grammar caused me so much confusion. Overall the story was ok."

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Could’ve been great

"Author needs this read and interpreted to proper English. It has potential; but it’s a bit painful to read. Ending doesn’t make sense, as it’s not about the man character. "

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"Is great but need more touch"

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Meuah

"Yeah I didn’t like Elijah getting his happy ending. In my opinion he didn’t deserve it. He didn’t get his cake like he deserved. The grammer was annoying because I read many books with grammer errors but never got annoyed because the plot was good. This plot was bs. "

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His biggest mistake

"I didn't finish this book because it was so frustrating reading an unedited book with literal mistakes in almost every paragraph. The writing is amaterish and stiff, there's no flow in the story. "

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