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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Out running the alpha

"Omg can't wait for more strong characters but I hope SHE is the strongest and fights for herself. "

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Intense and well written

"Very intense and interesting story with a good amount of twists in it! "

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Decent but now I hope Mason saves her and brings her to Grayson

" Put her and Greyson together period she deserves someone not at all evil"

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Running the Alpha

"Is there a book 2? I wish thete is because I love the story line! Please? I want more..."

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Outrunning the Alpha

"I'm a recent Innkit member, but I absolutely enjoy this storyyy."

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Out running the alpha

"So far so good. Better if I could read without post so much"

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Really good

"Really good story hope there’s more"

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Rademacher

"Bachelorette. Hehe."

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Really good read so far

"Really enjoying reading this so far, it’s a story with a decent hook and plenty of twists and turns. Excited to see where it leads too "

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Outracing the Alpha biok

"I like the author's writing skills it keeps one hooked, shall recommend to friends and family"

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Alpha

"Interesting. Not sure who is the bad guy in the story. Can’t wait to read more"

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Nice

"Good passing time reading.... "

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Princess

"Good story line but needs fleshing out. Good work author"

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Good

"So far good. A little messy in plot"

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I like how this is going, but I feel a little nervous about the last part. Of course i want to keep reading to find out, so I expect to all tourn good

"I think it’s a very good story"

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