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"Interesting storyline. "

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The Wind Crest Pack

"I find the story line very interesting 10 out of 10 would recommend "

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The wind crest pack

"Im really enjoying this book i can't wait to see what is gonna happen between Mia and the triples"

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Good story

"Suprisingly good so far but it needs more interaction between the main characters. "

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The Windcrest Pack

"Cute story. I can definitely feel the teenage angst going on between the main characters. I think it's important that there is a stabilization factor(s) at play that help to balance the chaos. In other words....Mia has her close relationship with Alec outside of the relationship with the triplets to maintain balance and the triplets have each other. Granted there is some sabotage going on, but that is typical sibling crap. I am speaking from experience here. I think that Mia's thought process on checking out on life to avoid hurting people is absolutely stupid. It is a common misconception to think that if you don't interact with the world around you it will not affect you, and you will not affect it . Your mere presence/existence within the world is all it requires to cause an effect. Mia is in rather a precarious situation. She needs to be very mindful of her words and actions, because it appears that she has been locked into a relationship with persons who are just as self-destructive as she is. I hate it for her, and I wish her brother Alec could be a little less of a d**k and more supportive. Anyway.... I thought your storyline was well organized, but this story is still very much at the beginning stages. There is sort of a plot being established but again it is still to early to really critique that either. Your writing style is smooth without being overly wordy. It is succinct and to the point which makes the reading go quicker. There were not a lot of grammatical errors, but I am not a writer so take that with a grain of salt. Keep writing!!"

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The wind Crest pack.

"I love it. The story is amazing. Pls keep updating. Cant wait long. U are doing a wonderful job "

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The Windcrest Pack

"I love this story, it is entertaining. I can't wait for more chapters. I couldn't put it down. ❤"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Good

"Good very good infact"

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Alpha's mate

"It is a very intriguing story and I think that the plot is perfect. I would recommend this to my friend as she likes the same stories as me.I gave it a 5 star rating because everything is perfect. "

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Definitely a page turner

"I really enjoy the story line so far. Its very different than what I've read in the past. The plot is new to me. "

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Great read

"I like the characters and the way mom freaks out.this story is realistic and witty.it's so believable.well written "

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The wind crest pack

"So far I can't put the book down. The story had me hooked from the beginning. I hope it works out for them. She deserves happiness and a long life. I hope she remembers her past. I believe that will help her to accept her fated mates"

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Good story

"I'm liking the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens good storyline. Excited to see what happens to the family. . "

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Triplets

"It's a good book. I dont like how she has three mates though. I feel like that would be hard having three mates at brothers. "

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Bond

"Great story, well done author"

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The wind crest pack

"Please continue the story. I liked it very much and could not put it down."

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Great Book

"I love books that have cheeky, badass no nonsense chicks as the main characters as for me it makes great reading with so much humour. Can’t wait for the updates"

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"Muy lindo"

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Yes

"I like the story the wolf's fascinate me "

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