Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

"Spero"

"Hope, such a lonely thought for those who do not have it, even if an abyss awaits the final decision to accept or reject hope...............interesting, short, to the point. C.S Lewis wrote his chronicles of Narnia on the basis of Hope that 4 children brought to a place where hope was a Lion, Aslan, rather than an abyss. Your point is well taken that choices belong to all of us, and the ones we choose will be final, perhaps, ending all that we know............I would enjoy reading more of your work, and sharing my books as well............The grammar is easily fixed and will enhance your writing style immensely."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation