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Hell Hounds

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Summary

Alex, buradan çıkmak zorundayız başka çaremiz yok

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Runaway: Beginning

E: Run, faster!

While he is holding my hand and running as fast as we can, couple of souls' screaming filled our ears. Alexander hold my hand thight and pulled me for running faster, but I couldn't.


Couple of times ago

"New souls came!" There were almost hundred people with me and I felt the ground. It wasn't ground actually but... Whatever. It was soft and made me uncomfortable. I didn't understand what was happening at that time but from murmuring of people informed me that I was dead.

And what now? I am dead and gone. Is it all? With an unexpected action something pulled me to front and than to left. I was going to look at the incident but a familiar voice said softly "I'm here". I looked at the face, it was Alex's! I was both surprised and happy.

"Alex we are dead!"
"I've noticed that."

People's, no no souls' names were announced and ther were told something. The others were waiting. Alex's name announced. I didn't want to let him go. I just wanted to hold his hand and go away. He looked at me and that soothed me for some reason I didn't understand. "Everything is all right, I will come back" (AN: that's what my dad said)
He moved and the only thing I could was watching back. After a while I couldn't see him at all. I wanted to cry but it was like not possible in any circumstances right now. After him two others moved as well. I was still here. Alex didn't come back. Moreover, none of the people didn't come back.

There were four guardian-like creatures was waiting. I don't know what they are but I guess I will call them fiends. Besides this fact, there were no doors, where these creatures were come and go! I was preplexed.

When my name announced I moved but my feet was still, I feel like the ground is moving. The topics the creature was talking was familiar. Alcohol, some sort of drugs, stealing, bad words and actions aberration and adultery. What kind of a shitty person was I?

"If another chance will given, will you appreciate it?" I was surprised by the question. I knew that I will not for sure. But what if, what if they send me back?

"Y-yes! Yes I will definitely appreciate it!

"So, if we send you back, will you use it for wellness?"

"For sure, but I cannot go back alone, without Alex."

"You already cannot. You lied! No one use the chance for wellness! You seem as if you want your dearly Alex a lot. Then go to him! To Hell!" It ordered someone and I found myself in a nasty place quickly.

It was sweltering. I felt like somebody was choking me. It was disastrous and had a bad odour. Some were screaming and others crying.

Hello! It's your Zeybum oppa 😌
It was the first fiction I am writing in English which is not my mother tongue. If I made a mistake please inform me.
Love y'all.
Chu~
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author

ay kız siz mahşerdesiniz galiba

6 years
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sorgu falan yapıyorlar insan koluna bir iki kopya yazar ohooo uçmuş sizin kafa

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anaaa cehenneme gidiverdi ya

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