Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

grit

"very nice story"

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His Temptress

"Liked it 🧡. "

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His temptress

"This book is badly in need of an editor. Too many mistakes."

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Before you go

"The story line was good but everything else was poor. The grammar especially was very poor. To be honest I don’t know why I kept on reading. I realize that the author wasn’t English but still he or she really needs to work on her spelling."

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