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Interesting story line..Great job Chaitanya Akella.suspense drama..investigation process...ending with a twist..keep it up.

"Story line is good.suspense drama with lot of emotions..Ending with a twist.."

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Super

"Narration and the way the story continued is so good and all the best for the upcoming stories.. GOOD JOB Chaitanya!!!!!"

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Exciting

"The characters are very relatable and the plot is intriguing. I like the idea of where this story is going. I suggest that you describe things more instead of just having dialogue the whole time. Line after line of diaglogue can sometimes get boring for the reader. Be mindful of smaller details. That is what normally attracts a reader. sorry it took me so long to do a review! I finally found time. Thank you for your patience. Sweet Teh"

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