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Managing mages

"I love this story!! You’ve created a whole wonderful world of characters that I’m so enjoying getting to know and learn how they’re all tied together. Can’t get enough, please keep them coming!! Can’t wait to read more of your stuff. So creative 👏🏻❤️"

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Managing Mages 💕💕

"Another great story 💕💕"

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Managing the mages

"Loved it.. amazing story..loved the girl's stubbornness even though she knows she can't compete him😅"

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Nicely paced

"The story is fast paced and exciting. Loving it so far."

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managing mages

"Excellent!"

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Very well spoken and descriptive writing

"The book is very well written with very good quality on the description and I just love it "

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Has amazing potential!

"This book is well writen though it could use another editing cycle. Few and far between i occasionally find myself having to rereadparts of the book so i could peice together the details that are missing. I feel there needs to be a section of Hawks and Marys first meeting maybe explore the raw attraction physically and have his personality or his arrogance spoil her openness to him? Thus throwing you a bit of a map before the raw aggression he has towards mary? Just a thought. OVER ALL an amazing find and read. I found i couldnt put it down."

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Magical

"I rated this book with as many stars as possible absolutely love it. I love the detail the Arthur puts into the writing describing the characters. You can picture the vivid scenes in your mind which makes it a lot more interesting to read the story. "

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Magic Mages

"I enjoy reading all this author's books and this one is one of my all time favorites. I can't get enough and I love these two together. Their chemistry is off the charts. Please update more! "

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Managing Mages

"Plots , Twists , Deception , Hatred , Love , This story has everything one could ask for .... Also Character development and progression of understanding and feelings between leading characters is amazing and different in a manner ... I enjoyed reading it .... ✨❤️✨"

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SOOOOO good 😘

"I really like this story. It's so steamy. Poor girl needs to learn to fight for herself tho. She has magic too. "

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Love this book

"You are a really good writer loving your books so far"

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Amazing little world by this author

"This story turned out so beautifully and I love how the author links his other stories to it. He’s build a whole, beautiful world. "

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Managing mages

"I like how the characters develop especially how Hawk was so into protecting Mary and the unique way he had to do it🙊😋😜. However much I like the endings, I dislike the fact that one never knows in which novel all will unravel and we have continuity like now how this book ended..."

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Blueangel826

"This by far is the best book I’ve read. The author draws you in and keeps you there inside immersed in the story. It’s like the words are magically infused to keep you entertained and poised on your toes to what will happen next! Love it!"

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Keeps me reading more

"I like the twists in the story it keeps me reading and wanting to know more. "

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It is amazing

"The history is really well written and such a trilling plot. Can't wait for more. I really enjoy it, keep me on edge all the time "

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Managing mages

"I really like the way you write I love the characters and the way they interact with each other "

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PLEEEEASE continue thisss

"Pls continue"

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It was worth the read

"I love this story - great job, I cant wait to read more!"

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